[Continuing the theme of my Epic Fantasy, ‘The
Daighacaer’ (“Day-gar-care”); Extract from Book I, Escape from Mount Vilipend]
[Pronunciations:
Mægéma
(Mag ee ma); Ninusa (Neen oo saa)
Segment One
Mægéma became aware of
the presence before Weda’Sel and Urus.
Her urgent words came out hurriedly.
Her in-drawn breath and gasp of “Weda’Sel, we may have other trouble
which I fear will be far worse than the fate which is being meted out to our
companions” was no more than a whisper in Weda’Sel’s consciousness. He felt the heaviness of Mægéma’s essence
and, at her direction turned as Urus pointed into the sky to the West of them.
“Weda’Sel! Look!
What is that?” he shouted; horror punctuating his every word.
“That’s a Blade
Dragon! By The Lighte Urus, it’s a Blade
Dragon!”
“What do we do,
Weda’Sel? It seems to be bearing down on
us.”
“There’s nothing that
we can do, Urus. We cannot outrun a
Blade Dragon and we cannot hide. If we
are being attacked by The Darke and this is to be our end, Urus, we have failed
The Lighte. Faeré will fall to The
Darke.” Weda’Sel couldn’t keep the despondence
from his voice. There was so very much
for him still to do. He continued to
stare at the huge shape bearing down on them.
Mægéma was very still
for a moment and then Weda’Sel felt her essence jump in excitement.
“What is it, Mægéma?”
“The Blade Dragon has
no essence of The Darke within it, Weda’Sel.
Not the slightest trace and it’s carrying another life force,
Weda’Sel. I believe it’s our scout who
escaped the clutches of those creatures of The Darke.”
“How is that
possible? I saw the Blade Dragons within
Mount Vilipend with my own eyes, Mægéma” said Weda’Sel, shaking his head.
“So did I” agreed Urus
“and believe me, Mægéma, they are creatures of The Darke.”
“I also know about the
Blade Dragons within Mount Vilipend, but those Blade Dragons were captives,
just as we all were. Didn’t you know
that, Weda’Sel?”
“I didn’t. I kept my distance from them. They fought all the time; if not with
prisoners who were thrown to them like prey; then amongst themselves. I could hear them shrieking and roaring all
the time. No, Mægéma, I was not fool
enough to voluntarily go anywhere near them.
Perhaps this one is somehow cloaking its Darkeness within The
Lighte?”
As Weda’Sel finished
speaking the Blade Dragon started descending.
*
Senthe descended slowly
because she didn’t know of any way to reassure the two terrified creatures on
the ground.
*
Weda’Sel felt Mægéma
beckon the beast but felt no response from it.
Weda’Sel absently noted
that the beast’s left claw was closed, whereas the right one was open. Inside that claw, Weda’Sel knew; lay the
remains of their scout.
He couldn’t shake the
feeling that The Blade Dragon was picking them off one by one.
Once again he felt an
awful sense of dread. He had failed; he
had failed not only his weary band of survivors who were desperately trying to
reach a haven, but he had failed The Lighte itself.
Then he noticed with
surprise that when the Blade Dragon landed, it landed on its right foot only
and gently, ever so gently, lowered its left foot to the ground and just as
gently rolled its claws open to reveal Ninusa.
Ninusa lay still in his apparent death but then Weda’Sel’s eyes opened
wide in astonishment. Ninusa started
moving a little. Ninusa opened his eyes
and looked directly into Weda’Sel’s eyes.
His surprise was obvious and he looked stunned but relieved. His expression changed to one of abject
terror when he looked up and saw the size of the claw which cradled him.
Mægéma spoke then. Weda’Sel didn’t know that Mægéma had a
physical voice and, at the sound of her voice, he looked just as shocked as
Urus and Ninusa did. “The Blade Dragon’s
name is Senthe. She is, as are all the
members of their troupe, of The Lighte, and she wishes to help us overcome the
hoards which are torturing our scouts.”
Weda’Sel continued
staring at the Blade Dragon, seemingly unable to move or say anything.
“Why?” asked the
ever-practical Urus. “Why would she want
to help us?”
Segment Two
Senthe sat down on her rump and
moved herself strategically to flatten the area around her so that she was
comfortable. “You asked me why I would
help you” she directed her words at Urus.
“As much as, in a cave not too far from here, there are of your kind being
tortured, we too are suffering. As we
talk here, there are many of our kind also being tortured and killed for
sport.” Two golden tears formed in her
eyes and she only just turned her head in time to prevent the diminutive group
at her feet from drowning in the briny water.
Her tears coursed down the incline to her left; two impromptu rivulets
chasing each other across the rocky ground.
“They are torturing Blade
Dragons? By The Lighte, how big are
these creatures?” asked Urus.
“They aren’t big at all. They appear to be of a similar size and
essence to yourself” Senthe appeared to frown in concentration as she looked
towards Weda’Sel “although there are very many differences”.
“Banloghs!” scowled Weda’Sel “but
how is it possible for banloghs to torture and kill Blade Dragons?”
“You’re not thinking, Weda’Sel” said
Mægéma gently in her new voice. “They’ve
captured baby Blade Dragons.”
“Is this true, Senthe?” asked
Weda’Sel.
“Yes. They have been hunting our babies for so long
now that we have forgotten when it first started. Blade Dragons have always lived in family
units which makes us easy prey for these hunters’ attacks. The hunters are wily and they sneak into our
habitats when they are sure that our adults are distracted by occurrences of
terrible magnitude. They orchestrate the
devastation themselves and each time it is necessary for all the adults to work
together in order to save the family; and each time, they have additional
hunters ready in waiting to steal our babies.
Their attacks were something to
which, throughout our history, we almost became inured, because we knew that
there was nothing that we could do to stop them; but there are now only two
family units left in all of Faeré and we joined our families into one unit to
provide us with strength of numbers. Our
joining into one unit hasn’t done us any good though. We are now the only few adults left in Faeré
and at this moment the hunters hold and are torturing and killing all our
babies. Our hearts are breaking; yet we
have no way of stopping them. The
hunters capture and drag our young deep into their caverns where we cannot
reach them.”
“Banloghs!” spat Weda’Sel. “We’ll see about this. I will work out something. They must be stopped.”
“I fear that anything we do will be
too late, Weda’Sel” said Ninusa sadly.
“The caverns are high up on a mountain and even if all our foot soldiers
were to somehow survive the bogs through which we will have to travel, and we
do manage to rush them, they have the locational advantage of height and they
are incredibly agile over the very inhospitable terrain.”
“Then we’ll have to get them off the
mountain” growled Urus.
“But how?” asked Ninusa.
“I don’t know, but among us we must
be able to come up with something” said Urus.
Weda’Sel was staring at a mountain in the distance. It was the only one of any significant size
in the area. “Is that where they are?”
he asked Senthe, pointing in the direction of the mountain.
“Yes” said Senthe. That one word summed up the despair of them
all. The mountain’s visibly jagged snow
and ice-clad slopes rose from the border of an enormous ice barrier which
stretched for what appeared to be many leagues.
Surrounding that were dark indentations which, even at such a distance,
they could see were iced-over lakes.
Ninusa answered Weda’Sel’s question
even before he asked it. “Those dark
areas are bogs, Weda’Sel. Treacherous
bogs within a wild, windy and a mostly wooded region; deep bogs covered in ice
but in some areas the ice is treacherously thin and the stagnant waters seem to
lie in wait for the unwary.” Ninusa
shivered as he remembered.
“We nearly rode right into one of
them” said Ninusa. “They lie concealed
beneath a growth of wild plants with snake-like tentacles. As we moved, those tentacles caught at us. Those plants are alive and were aware of our
every move, Weda’Sel; they were lying in wait for us. Our swords were useless. The more we slashed at the tentacles, the
more of them rose and wound themselves around us; and then, as they started
squeezing the life out of our da’ques, the banloghs arrived. There seems to be some cooperation between
the plants and the banloghs. Our da’ques
are lost, Weda’Sel; we could do nothing for them, and their screams of dying
agony will never leave me. We were
dragged up the mountain by our feet and, as each of my companions’ screams
subsided, I knew that they were either dead or unconscious.” Ninusa was clearly struggling to continue but
he kept on because he knew that he had to give as much detail as possible.
“Did you remain conscious until you
reached the cavern?” Mægéma asked quietly.
“No, I didn’t even get as far as the
cavern. That is the strangest thing of
all. I lost consciousness about halfway
up the mountain. By that time, there wasn’t a sound from anyone else. Only The Lighte knows how I extracted myself
from their clutches. I have no
recollection of it.”
“You were purposely set free,
Ninusa” said Weda’Sel bluntly and with a deathly certainty. “The banloghs knew that you are one of a
scouting party and they wanted you to go back to the main body. They also wanted you to have just enough
information to give to the main party so that the main party will want to
urgently launch a rescue mission. In
that way they will have managed to get you to do their work for them and they
will certainly think that, since the main party will be desperate to rescue
your companions, they will hurry towards unknown dangers without taking the
necessary precautions. Once the main
party is near enough, the banloghs will lure everyone into the bogs to capture
them. I know the way their minds work;
The Lighte forgive me, I know.”
The poem I've chosen to accompany this post is about a father's love and I wrote it for my nephew on the birth of his son...
The poem I've chosen to accompany this post is about a father's love and I wrote it for my nephew on the birth of his son...
Hands of Love
(for Kyle)
Hands
of Love
Touch
the tiny face
Of
his diminutive image
His
miracle of grace
Smiling
eyes
Meet
sleepy eyes
One
unfocused by tears
One a
trusting newborn gaze
Hands
of Love
Gentling
a tiny young life
Within
the cradling arms
Of a
father’s tender love
Your poem is beautiful. I can't imagine writing an epic fantasy. You are very courageous. I love writing but it takes a backseat in my life more than I want it to. I guess that I'm still trying to figure out this whole "balance" thing. I hope that you enjoy your Sunday.
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Thank you, Jaime.
ReplyDeleteIt's a passion of mine so I don't consider the time. I should, I suppose... :)
Interesting. The dragon is not fearsome in nature as they expected and had his own agenda.
ReplyDeleteI admit that Segment One was harder for me to follow because of all the proper nouns. I remembered Weda'Sel, but there's "Urus" and "Mægéma" in the same first sentence, and "Lighte Urus" and "Blade Dragon" in the next paragraph, all of which make contextualizing them harder. I know I'm supposed to remember "Faeré" and "Darke" with the callback to "The Lighte," but my memory isn't good enough, so by then I was drowning in names. I imagine this wouldn't happen if I was simply reading a novel, but I figured it would be useful feedback for handling dunderheaded readers like myself in excerpts.
ReplyDeleteI'm so sorry, John. Herein lies one of the problems. I am so involved in the story that I know all the characters intimately. I do try to 'gentle' A-Z readers into the segment but, honestly, I was tired. I'm not excusing myself, just stating...
DeleteI'll remember for the rest of the segments.
I'm also so sorry about your health and I can't believe that you are still writing every day. Good Grief! When I'm sick, I'm man down and cotton wool fills my cranium.
I'm helping out a friend (a pharmacologist) at a supplementary health clinic and have asked her to give me a list of supplements which you can take which may reduce the acidity in your blood so you're not in so much pain. As soon as I have it, I'll give it to you.
Thank you once again for taking the time to read through my segments. Please know that I sincerely appreciate your insights.
Best wishes
Felicity
Great writing. Just found your blog and will be back to read more.
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Thanks so much and I love your blog too - so cute...
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